His eyes were like obsidian
so dark and yet so very clear
Their gravity pulled her in
like a void out in deep space
Willingly, she was ensnared
by the intensity of his gaze
The inky blackness warmed her
and she felt it reach her depths
No, they neither grim or false
she could see all in that stare
To stay unblinking for so long
surely they adore their view
6/17/20
Intense, I like this a lot, there is much that is hinted at. I would like to know more please.
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I’m glad you liked it! I’m interested to know what you thought it hinted at actually.
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It’s interesting to hear other people interpretations of my and others writing.
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I’m blaming the eyes in the photo for my interpretation on this. The vibe I got was a vampire encounter, his eyes dead from long years yet so knowlegeable of the world enticing her on with both the horror and the curse of his immortality.
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I love this interpretation. While it was not my idea when I wrote…I actually think I like yours better 😂
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What is odd is that vampire stuff is not usually my cup of tea, outside Dracula, and the odd other story but I enjoyed this because of that idea. I love that the subjectiveness of one’s experiences can add to something that was written about something else… do you fancy sharing your inspiration for this work?
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I’m not interested in Vampires either, but I did like that interpretation nonetheless. My inspiration came from watching and talking to someone that I admire. It’s written from a romantic perspective. However, it is supposed to hint at something mysterious and alluring.
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It definitely succeeded, that’s why I am hoping you do more at some point, whether a different aspect, or an elaboration. I love a bit of romance when it is classy.
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Thanks! An elaboration of this poem? Or a similar poem?
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I will take both! Greedy as I am for the written word.
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I will see what I can conjure up!
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Happy Ste!
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